
We have been reading 'The Jigaree' in class. There are seven words from our Word Wall that are in the Jigaree story - I, can, see, a, it, is and me. We enjoyed 'The Jigaree' so much that we thought we could 'innovate' on this story. That means we could use the pattern of the words in this story to help us write our own stories.


Here is Johanna's story:
I can see the rain
It is pouring on me.
Pouring here,
Pouring there,
Rain is pouring everywhere.
Here is Bryce's story:
I can see a yellow bin
It is filled with rubbish..
Rubbish here
Rubbish there
Bins filled with rubbish everywhere.
Here is Laura's story:

I can see the pink flower
It is wet in the rain
Wet here
Wet there
Flowers are wet everywhere.
I can see the rain
It is pouring on me.
Pouring here,
Pouring there,
Rain is pouring everywhere.
Here is Bryce's story:

I can see a yellow bin
It is filled with rubbish..
Rubbish here
Rubbish there
Bins filled with rubbish everywhere.
Here is Laura's story:

I can see the pink flower
It is wet in the rain
Wet here
Wet there
Flowers are wet everywhere.
Here is Brooke's story:

I can see a plant
It is moving in the rain
Moving here
Moving there
Plants are moving everywhere.

I can see a plant
It is moving in the rain
Moving here
Moving there
Plants are moving everywhere.
Here is Ben's story:
I can see the raindrops
Dripping from the sail
Raindrops here
Raindrops there
Raindrops dripping everywhere.
Would you like to add a story to our collection?
Leave a comment with your ideas.
Keep watching for more of our stories!
(THANKYOU MRS DUFFY FOR HELPING US WITH THIS POST
- we love working with you!)
Johanna, Bryce, Laura, Brooke and Ben
I can see the raindrops

Dripping from the sail
Raindrops here
Raindrops there
Raindrops dripping everywhere.
Would you like to add a story to our collection?

Leave a comment with your ideas.
Keep watching for more of our stories!
(THANKYOU MRS DUFFY FOR HELPING US WITH THIS POST
- we love working with you!)Johanna, Bryce, Laura, Brooke and Ben
4 comments:
I can see some clever children
I'm sure they're 1M Gems.
Learning here,
Learning there,
They are learning everywhere.
I like my class very much and thankyou Mrs Marrinan for being a great teacher! I like to work and play with my friends.
From, Isabella Grasic
A rain drop, so beautiful and small,
so clear and cold, but precious to us all.
From the cloud it drops, to the ground we can see,
it doesn't take long before its all over me. :-)
Hope you all have a great day !!!
Darren. ( Naomi's dad )
Ben's Mum and Naomi's Dad are very clever. We like their writing!
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