Jacob made a number of attempts yesterday to write a poem using 'alliteration'.
NO!!!
He started many times, but found it hard.
Did he say...
NO!!!
Today he started again, with a new idea.
He asked for advice,
He PERSEVERED...
and he 'got it'! 
Rockets,
Rockets,rolling round round-a-bouts,
rumbling,
racing rapidly.
Jacob proved that with PATIENCE and PERSEVERANCE you CAN do it!
Jacob proved that with PATIENCE and PERSEVERANCE you CAN do it!
And all the ones he started.... he's now going back to finish!
13 comments:
I like Jacob's poem because its so cool. I like it very, very much. Can you please make another poem Jacob?
Five fairy flosses feeding Flynn's family fast.
Five fairy flosses feeding Flynn's family fast.
Here is my D poem
Seven dogs digging the dirt,
Disel, Daniel, David, Donna, Delia, Dorian and Dory, digging deep for dog bones
Jacob's Mum said...
Fantastic work Jacob,I knew you could do it!. Here is one I made up because Jacob loves trains so much.
Rusty
Races
Rheneas
Rapidly
Round
Rickety
Railways
Jacob's Mum, we love your 'r' words even though we don't understand some of them. What does 'rheneas' mean?
Hi 1M Gems,
Rheneas is the name of a train from Thomas the Tank Engine and Friends and so is Rusty. Talk to you soon.
Here is another r poem
Redbacks
Riding
Rapid
Rivers on
Round
Red
Rafts.
You've really got the hang of it, Jacob. There'll be no stopping you now!
I think you should Jacob should call his poem, Rumbling Rockets
patrick said
i have a poem about 'r' words
rascally roadrunner races rocks round rainbows
and i think jacobs poems are great
Your poems are really rad too, Patrick. Imagine what you could create if you and Jacob worked together on a poem? Now that would surely be great!
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